Sunday, June 5, 2011

Lost And Found

LOST and FOUND

Darkness overcomes  my body, shadows run like banshees in my soul, ruthless and quick, the light escapes my mind. I have found the lost part of me in the darkness, put away by the social day that I must be a part of, yet it is still and in my mind it rages. Lost yet found, the war of my own never won or lost, but in the light I have found it, right in front of my eyes!

16 comments:

  1. true reflection...now matrix melding! awesome

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  2. This is a very real read...I like it.
    Great Job!

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  3. Interesting reflection.

    Joyce
    http://joycelansky.blogspot.com/2011/06/lost-and-found-gbe2.html

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  4. Dark poem and then light – I like the contrast.

    Theresa Wiza
    http://helpforsingleparents.blogspot.com/2011/06/lost-and-found-teachers-who-kill-their.html

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  5. I like the imagery you used! And that you did not edit your thoughts and feelings to suit the comfort of others! One must unlock their inner beast in order to know themselves as a whole.

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  6. Wow, this is powerful! Well done!

    Kathy
    http://www.thetruckerswife.com/

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  7. '...shadows run like banshees in my soul...' Absolutely love that line. Nice piece :)

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  8. Wow! Powerful, short, intense, meaningful. Loved it!

    Julie
    http://fit-fifty.blogspot.com/

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  9. Left me breathless. Nicely done!

    http://earthdragonhealing.blogspot.com

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  10. I have read this 3 times so far. I do NOT do that with poems. This is powerful and I FEEL when I read it.

    ~chickee

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