Sunday, June 5, 2011

Lost And Found

LOST and FOUND

Darkness overcomes  my body, shadows run like banshees in my soul, ruthless and quick, the light escapes my mind. I have found the lost part of me in the darkness, put away by the social day that I must be a part of, yet it is still and in my mind it rages. Lost yet found, the war of my own never won or lost, but in the light I have found it, right in front of my eyes!
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16 comments:

  1. Brenda StevensJune 6, 2011 at 2:35 AM

    true reflection...now matrix melding! awesome

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  2. JennJune 6, 2011 at 11:25 AM

    This is a very real read...I like it.
    Great Job!

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  3. AnonymousJune 6, 2011 at 11:29 AM

    I love the rawness of this!

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  4. Catch My WordsJune 6, 2011 at 12:28 PM

    Interesting reflection.

    Joyce
    http://joycelansky.blogspot.com/2011/06/lost-and-found-gbe2.html

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  5. MarianJune 6, 2011 at 2:00 PM

    Wow! Very well done!

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  6. Theresa WizaJune 6, 2011 at 3:24 PM

    Dark poem and then light – I like the contrast.

    Theresa Wiza
    http://helpforsingleparents.blogspot.com/2011/06/lost-and-found-teachers-who-kill-their.html

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  7. JulJune 6, 2011 at 5:13 PM

    Smile

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  8. True2MineJune 6, 2011 at 11:05 PM

    I like the imagery you used! And that you did not edit your thoughts and feelings to suit the comfort of others! One must unlock their inner beast in order to know themselves as a whole.

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  9. KateJune 7, 2011 at 7:36 AM

    Beautiful!

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  10. UnknownJune 7, 2011 at 7:39 AM

    Wow, this is powerful! Well done!

    Kathy
    http://www.thetruckerswife.com/

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  11. Mojo WritinJune 7, 2011 at 10:43 AM

    '...shadows run like banshees in my soul...' Absolutely love that line. Nice piece :)

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  12. ResidentGamerJune 8, 2011 at 9:57 AM

    Great piece. Love it!

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  13. JulieDDJune 9, 2011 at 8:53 AM

    Wow! Powerful, short, intense, meaningful. Loved it!

    Julie
    http://fit-fifty.blogspot.com/

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  14. Laurie Peel, CRA-RPJune 10, 2011 at 6:43 PM

    Left me breathless. Nicely done!

    http://earthdragonhealing.blogspot.com

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  15. AnonymousJune 10, 2011 at 8:45 PM

    I have read this 3 times so far. I do NOT do that with poems. This is powerful and I FEEL when I read it.

    ~chickee

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  16. VanessaJune 11, 2011 at 5:58 PM

    strong...

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